Thursday, September 1, 2011

“The Contents of the Dead Man’s Pocket” Conflicts & Surprise

“The Contents of the Dead Man’s Pocket” Conflicts & Surprise


The name of the story is “The Contents of the Dead Man’s Pocket” when tom re-entered the apartment his yellow paper flew out of the window and he tired to go retrieve it. Like an idiot he got stuck so that was the internal conflict. Then Tom got really scared when he looked down and he almost fell down. This paper was really important to him it had everything on that paper so he had to get it. But tom realized how short life was and decided to spend more time with his wife than work. His near death experience changed his life

2 comments:

  1. The internal conflict was either going to the movies with his wife or staying home.

    Remember to capitalize proper nouns.

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  2. Would you have stepped on the ledge? I know you are tough, but I wonder if you would risk your life for your ideas.

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