Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Movie Plot Summary Paragraph

Movie Plot Summary Paragraph


In The movie 300 there is a war between two Greek armies The Spartan army and the Persian army. Xerxes has been taking over many cities and now threatened Sparta. Xerxes sent a messenger to Sparta to tell them to surrender Xerxes gave leonideious ten days to surrender. So basically what happened is that leonideious killed the messenger and started the war there was only 300 Spartans and more than a hundred thousand Persian soldiers the Spartans put up a good fight but there was to many Persian soldiers so all of the Spartans dies and Persia won the war.

4 comments:

  1. That makes sense, keep it up an do your best.

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  2. This movie sounds pretty awesome! but someone dies so I wouldn't watch it!

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  3. I love this movie I'm glad you wrote about it. Ilove war.

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  4. Brian, c'mon, you're a SOPHOMORE now; write like one. There several run-on sentences in this paragraph. Names are proper nouns and need proper capitalization.

    If you can, try to follow the outline Ms. Priester provides. This will help organize your paragraph. Who are the characters and what is the climax of the story?

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