Business Letter Final Draft

17701San Pasqual Valley Road
Escondido, CA 92025
July 14, 2011

Ms.Tia Moore
Program Director
San Pasqual Academy
17701 San Pasqual Valley Road
Escondido, CA 9205

Dear Ms. Moore:

I am writing to request that students at San Pasqual Academy can go on self-passes at a younger age. Currently, students must be sixteen to go off of campus without an adult. I think students should be allowed to earn self-passes at the age of fifteen.

Students should be allowed to go on self-passes at the age of fifteen because I don’t think that they should have to wait until the are 16. My reasons are that sometimes it gets really, really boring on campus and i would be nice if we could go to a friends house off campus instead of always going with the same people all the time to the same places.

Thank you for your consideration and your time. I appreciate it and look forward to meeting with you so we can talk about this topic more. I hope that you do accept this request for self-pass at the age of fifteen i think that would be great and a lot of kids would enjoy the opportunity to go on self pass at the age of fifteen instead of sixteen.

Sincerely,


Brian