Wednesday, October 20, 2010

“The Interlopers” Alternate Ending

“The Interlopers Alternate Ending
At the end of the story the two men were pinned down by a massive beech tree that suddenly fell on them as they were both face to face. There was about 9 to 10 figures running their direction they mistake them as their men little did they know that those figures were a pack of hungry wolves.  As they lie their with a giant beech tree crushing them both men hoping that their men get there. Finally Ulrich men get there both of them said that when their men get their that they will free one another so they get the giant beech tree off of Ulrich. Gerog was asking Ulrich to get the tree off of him and he just laughed and threw the wine at him and him and his men just walked off into the woods.

5 comments:

  1. You spelled a couple things wrong, and this ending is pretty mean.

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  2. Your Alternate ending is similar to mine,except the very ending. Good!

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  3. HA HA that was an okay story but you spelled some words wrong but good job little man.

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  4. ahah you spelled some words wrong but did a good job overall

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