Thursday, July 14, 2011

:Business Letter Introduction & Topic Brainstorm

Readers, which of the following should I write a business letter about? Please add your comments below.




Potential Recipient: Tia Moore, Director, San Pasqual Academy

Request: I am writing to request that students can go on self-pass before the age of 16.

Explanation: Students should be allowed to go on self-pass at a younger age in order to have a normal teenage experience.



Potential Recipient: Chip Kelly, Head Football Coach, University of Oregon

Request: I would like to visit your campus. During my visit, I would like to observe a football practice, attend a class, and stay in a dorm with one of your players. I want to learn about campus life at the University of Oregon.

Explanation: I am a high school football player and am interested in attending your school.



Potential Recipient: Lane Kiffin, Head Football Coach, University of Southern California

Request: I would like to visit your campus. During my visit, I would like to observe a football practice, attend a class, and stay in a dorm with one of your players. I want to learn about campus life at the University of Southern California.

Explanation: I am a high school football player and am interested in attending your school.

2 comments:

  1. dude,man it looks good like mine

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  2. That is a nice business letter but it looks like Pablo's. I do hope you guys worked together.

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